My Niece

My niece is getting married Aug 9,02 and since I won't be able to attend in body, I told her I will be there in spirit. I want your honest opinion, do you think it is good enough for her wedding?

Wind, that is beautiful and very heartfelt. I love it.

The only thing I would change is in the second to the last paragraph, where you have thought, you might want to change that to though out. I think you have an extra t at the end. Just a typo though, and probably wasn't on your original.

It's beautiful, and if I was the bride and groom I would love to get something so personal and heartwarming.

Joan thanks, I didn't even notice it until you mention it...wwhheeeewww glad I haven't sent it to them yet. I told all that I can't type or spell lol.

I wonder if go_vols would corect it for me?

Well, now that I look back on my reply to you, I can't spell or type either! I spelled it though out, and it should have been through out?!? I'm not sure now. Any English teachers out there?

It's still a wonderful tribute to the bride and groom. I am not critisizing, only trying to help with the spelling and got confused in the process. Sorry.



This message was edited Friday, Aug 2nd 3:14 AM

I wanted this one to be perfect for a change,oh well back to school for me lol.

It IS perfect Wind. I wouldn't change a thing other than that spelling we can't quite figure out. Someone will help with that though, I know it.

Do you want it to say; thought out the rights and wrongs
or throughout the rights and wrongs?

In the line; 'Letting you know that he is still cares' take out the IS.

Very lovely picture and wonderful poem. Your neice should feel very honored to receive such a gift. That is absolutely wonderful. Things made from the heart are the greastest and most wonderful and should be cherished throughout the years to come.

Beautiful rose and very nice poem.
Just a suggestion....I would use All Caps on the word DAY,
on the title line since all the other words are in caps on that line.
And maybe leave a space between the title line and the first line of the poem.

It will be something I am sure they will treasure.

Bobbi

Oh that so beautiful and Congrat's your neice getting married this month. My nephew will getting married this October"2002"

wingsurfer, that is beautiful.....

Thanks all, I made another boo,boo but have corrected them all :}

That's beautiful, Wind! I'd love to get something like that! I'd put it front and center in the wedding album, too, if not framed and on my wall!

I'm not a teacher, but am the daughter of two of them ~ will that do? LOL! It should be "throughout" and I didn't see anything else that hasn't been mentioned. It's beautiful!! I'd be thrilled to get something like that!

Wind,
'Just lovely! :-)

Wingnut that's close enough as long as you don't make me wear the DUNCE HAT(/) and send me to the corner lol.
I am an awful speller and even worse at typing.

Thanks Oscar

*Grin!* Nope, got that dunce hat used on me enough at home. I finally snuck it out of the house and hid it in the barn. They never did find it... ;)

Lol, I have never had to wear it but did have to sit in the corner a lot hee,hee.

That's beautiful, Kit. I can't wait to see you later today -- so glad you guys can make it to lunch!

Oh, so beautiful! Only God's touch could make something so beautiful and I pray that He will touch your niece and nephew in the same way!

I am so happy to have met ya'll we had a wonderful time.

Thanks Vic, I know that he will.