Lagoons for Laypeople

Hi All! I just got involved with this website and love how friendly and informative everyone is. My name is Edward and I'm a filmmaker in San Diego. My love of nature began with the lagoons in my local area. I recently merged my passions of filmmaking and nature into a hour long documentary "Lagoons for Laypeople - Wetland Wildlife." I created a simple structure with on-screen notes so viewers will have a chance to see what makes the lagoon work, and why it is essential to protect and preserve them.

I was hoping that this would be handy for kids and adults that have just taken an interest in their local wildlife. I would love for anyone interested to take a look at the one minute trailer I have created and let me know what they liked or didn't. I have gotten some feedback from colleagues and friends and would appreciate a perspective from some avid nature lovers.

Here is a link to view a one minute trailer:
https://www.createspace.com/Store/ShowEStore.jsp?id=254026

Thanks!